All Comments on 'Orange Juice'

Oooh very sexy.

Welcome back ! Good story

Soooooo hot!

I think perhaps this story could go a sequel. How will Trish's mother react. Will she understand and accept her daughter's sexuality or will she go ape and try to ruin a budding romance? Worth thinking about, Virginia. We'll be watching this space.

Wow. Great story. Hope you continue.

Love the description of what Beth's womanscent did for Trish.

Hmm, some more orange juice sounds good right about now

Wow! I'm going to go check my kitchen now. I think I heard a noise.

I thought that Beth was just going to be a catalyst, a way for Trish to realize that she was in love with Julianne. (Who after all did the romantic stuff in the story, including setting up the "date".)

Still, she makes a sweet enough first girl, and Julianne (and her toys) will only be a room away…threesome, perhaps?

What a sweet, sexy story. I also thought that Beth would be the catalyst for Trish and Julianne to get together,especially after the bag of tricks incident.

I like the emotional content of this story and am intrigued by the phrase 'cold tantrums'. That evokes that whole, "You did something that pisses me off, but I won't tell you what it is, if you are so stupid as to not know what you did." I suspect, not sure here, that it is a 'cold tease' that makes the hot forgiveness and makeup sex all the hotter.

A tip in the sex scenes: I try, not always successfully, to reveal what the character is seeing or feeling. I like your offering the horse grass description. Otherwise there is the danger of creating a list: I touched this. She moved that. Always good to have people stop and talk.

Nice work,