All Comments on 'Orbital Academy 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
lots of fun :)

I love the setup.. it is a really great start.

Two strong female characters - and space for the other squaddies to be different.

jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenover 10 years ago
The Capt knew

Of course she knew what they meant xD

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Mmm

Excellent story. Lots of places to take it. That shower scene made me cum hard. You're such a tease!

Dry_opinionDry_opinionover 10 years ago
Loved it

Lots of jocking, teasing and good natured fun. Congrats on a chapter well done!

jarheadcamperjarheadcamperover 7 years ago
High Schoo H.S.

This story is way too juvenile for my tastes.

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