All Comments on 'Orbital Academy 16'

That blue core seems to harbour huge promises ... and then that mysterious blue crystal too. Thanks for a good story.

i like the direction you turned this story into and the answers and question you gave us are intriguing.keep up the good work. 5 stars

Love the story and the intensity. Love the longer chapter too. So many questions with too many answers. Looking forward to the next chapter!

You had better not be one of those, its okay to 'build character' writers...

I don't want all the investment you've built around our favorites to punish them and us for something the story needs. I love them too much.

You at least gave an out for Chiphead, keep the faith for the rest!

Loved the AI and Erri arguing. Loved all the teasing. Most of all loved an interesting logical plot. Thanks for taking user comments into account. Thanks for sharing the inspiration and love. You're awesome!