by MissConstrue
I think it's a great story with a lot of potential, and I hope you keep writing. You are better than 99% of the authors on this site.
I just discovered this today and appreciate the callout to my story. I'm glad you're giving your take on a similar concept. I think you actually give more logic and sense to yours than I gave to mine, haha.
To everyone complaining: please. You have to allow a tiny suspension of disbelief for a jerk off tale. Do you really want to read ultra realistic erotica?
To the author, please continue. I really want to see where you take this. I hope you ramp it up and later let her see how destroyed her life has become when she recovers. Obviously, haha. Good job.