All Comments on 'Orc Dominion: Conquest Ch. 03'

I love the erotic part of your writing; that being said, I also really want someone to smash the orcs over their heads so they're not so smug all the time =P

Anon,

Thanks for leaving feedback! As you saw in this chapter, a number of orcs bit the dust! I promise more will be dying in the future! Check out my blog (link in my bio) for a preview of chapter 4 to get an idea of what I mean ;)

They make them sound invisible, they're not, they can be killed quite easily when stabbed in the heart, head or jugular. They also can bleed and yes some of the high ranking orcs they are sometimes more berserk and filled with rage, but they don't rape, not at least in LOTR they don't, they just take prisoners and kill the humans.

I don't know why you think they come across aa invincible...several die in this very chapter!

Also, these aren't LotR orcs, they are much more in line with D&D orcs, except a bit more civilized.