Orc Dominion: Elfin Descent Ch. 10

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The thick cock plunged deeper into her mouth until the tip began to probe at her throat. The prince's grip on her hair kept her in place as he pumped his hips in and out of her. At first it threw her off kilter to not be able to move her head, but she soon slipped into a pattern of sucking and moving her lips in time with his rhythm.

Another roar from the crowd signaled the end of the first round of the tourney. Jeanette's skirt was over half gone, and soon the competitor's would be fighting over the remnants which would leave her backside bare.

"That's it Princess, suck my big orc cock. Wrap your tight little elfin lips around it and suck! I'm going to give you a nice big load to swallow. Keep sucking it and earn your reward!" Trogar grunted as he began to buck rapidly enough that his motions would seem strange to any who looked over.

Luckily for the princess, Soleil and Florette were still standing around the table blocking the view. Lyriena worked her tongue back and forth until it began to ache as she suckled her lips furiously on this thrusting cock. Her free hand cupped his balls, and for a moment she considered squeezing as hard as she could. Instead, she rolled them over her palm and massaged them beneath her fingers. It wasn't worth angering the Prince, and it sounded as if he would be done soon.

"You're sucking his cock like a professional, Your Highness. I don't think I could do it better." Soleil snickered as she watched Lyriena take the shaft.

"Oh she's quite good sis, but there are a few tricks we could teach her. Do you want me to teach you how to deep throat, Princess?" Florette asked.

Lyriena tried to ignore the twins and focus on the task at hand. Despite belonging to Trogar she found she was enjoying sucking on the cock. Even the danger of being beneath the table was enflaming her in its own way. True, the risk of discovery was low, since they were in a private booth. And unlike in the gloryhole, which was anonymous, here the people actually knew who she was. While the former had provided an element of safety, the latter made her feel daring, but liberated. What has this place done to me? It truly has corrupted me into a wanton!

For the moment though, she didn't care and continued to suck on Trogar's cock. Soon the orc's grunts reached a fevered pitch, and a moment later she tasted the explosion of semen as it burst forth from the tip of his rod right into the back of her throat. She swallowed quickly, gulping down the thick large load of orc jizz as it gushed inside her mouth. Spurt after spurt painted her tonsils, but the princess clenched her eyes shut and managed to take it all down.

"Oh that's good Lyriena...mmm...that's real good. Keep sucking, I want you to get used to it. Your place is on your knees with my cock in your mouth." Trogar grinned as anger flashed across Lyriena's face. He kept her there for several minutes holding her head with his hand until finally his cock shriveled and softened all the way. He then pulled it out and put it away, before signaling for the princess to rise.

The taste of his cum lingered in her mouth as she took her seat and fixed her dress. She glared at the twins as they giggled to themselves not realizing her lipstick was smeared all around her mouth. She took another long drink of wine to try and wash it out, and then another after that to steady her nerves. The crowd roared again as the last tilt of the day finished. Trogar had released her just in time to see the mystery knight unseat the last jouster.

The knight approached Jeanette's box and raised his lance for the final favor. With a heated smile, she shifted her hips and pushed her white, heart shaped panties to the floor. She then bent over to grab them, and placed them over the tip of the lance and let them go. The soft white undergarment slid down the pole and landed by the knight's wrist.

The crowd roared in approval, drowning out the Queen's cry for the mystery knight to identify himself. But in the furor of adulation as the crowd strained to see their Queen, he slipped out of the stadium and disappeared.

"Well, that was entertaining. The knight should have stayed around though, I'm sure my mother wanted to offer him a more fulfilling reward. As for you, Princess, lose your guards and meet me on the hill outside the city where you go riding. I have an all together different sort of riding lesson for you planned."

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kyriss12kyriss12almost 8 years ago
anynomuas/opinion response

Zentara had an alternate ending where the queen got screwed over in her deal, and the orcs over ran the kingdom before being killed by the rebellion.

If that's what you're talking about than it's non cannon. Basically the author wanted to go one direction, but the story took a different turn, so he posted both the good and bad endings.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
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I think you should work to complete Elfin Descent and then go to your shorter stories, they really didn't work for me. Perhaps include some of the themes in the longer works. Did I miss something. At the end of Zentara, Jeanette is in the gutter,At the beginning of Rebellion she is again queen, what did I miss?

OrcDominionOrcDominionalmost 8 years agoAuthor
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Those are fair comments about Trogar. If you generally enjoy the story, I suggest sticking around until ay least ch 12. Things will move in a different direction after that.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Starting to lose me.

I've enjoyed your other work, but I'm afraid that with this chapter "Elfin Descent" is headed in a direction that's not to my taste. It's not so much your decision to make Lyrenia more an ingenue than Jeanette: frankly I love a good corruption-of-an-innocent tale. The problem is that Trogar fails utterly, IMO, at being the kind of interesting, three-dimension scoundrel necessary to drive it: he's just a vile oaf with an inferiority complex and sycophantic groupies. Instead of telling me a story about how Lyrenia's sexuality is first awakened and then deliberately twisted until she's left craving perversity, you're telling me one about how some small, vicious assholes with political leverage gratuitously humiliate and abuse her. As a result the sex scenes are more uncomfortable than hot.

kyriss12kyriss12almost 8 years ago

At first I trogar seemed like something of an intellectual, and I had hopes for him, but now he's proved himself to be even more petty than his old man.

I really hope this doesn't end like the story first one and make Lyriena become a mindless cock slut who publicly debases herself while letting the orcs overrun the elven territory.

Lyriena seems pretty cool so I'd like to see Trogar pull his head out of his ass and treat her with a little more respect while keeping the kinky shit in the bedroom, while letting the elven territories continue to operate on their own.

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