by OrcDominion
So first thing first: Great Story and a nice plot. I'm really enjoy reading your stories. It was a great idea to add more points of view into the story. But i was thinking about Jeanette cheating on Turogg, i mean she is already doing it in a kind of way and i don't know if cheating is really your thing but seeing the Queen of Zentara only being buggered gets kind of boring so, it's just a little tip and a personal wish, how about Jeanette gives up to her urges and let's someone else penetrete her pussy?
Greetings
Thanks for commenting. I always appreciate feedback, both negative and positive. I understand your point and agree with it. Chapter 6 will be a step in the right direction for you, and there will be even more of what you want coming after that. Keep reading and I don't think you will be disappointed!