All Comments on 'Orc Dominion: Triumph Ch. 03'

Finally! This is a chapter worthy of your first tale. There is intrigue and suspense, a sense of foreboding and ominous things to come. Lies within lies, plans within plans, secrets beyond measure. Well done! And of course there is sex, although this time it felt a little short. I would’ve loved to have witnessed more of what Drauken saw or overheard in the secret passages. It sounded like our fair maiden Hope, was just beginning to enjoy herself immensely, so much so I feel sorry for the poor guard who was going to be taking her out to the country to get away from it all. You owe us one.

The interesting thing here is I’m almost more interested in the story outcome than the erotic adventure.

Nice chapter, very entertaining.

Hi, I don't remember Bernadette. Who is she and what happened to her?

Bernadette was Augras' liver from the prologue. As to what happened to her, that will be revealed over the course of the story.