All Comments on 'Orc Masters Ch. 04'

Lots of themes within themes - well done

I really loved your story! Yunnie was totally hot, and it looks like the other women are going to be just as slutty as her.

Hope you keep writing!

Abduction, rape, gang-bang, mind control, non-consent, BDSM, non-human, huge giant cocks, buckets of cum, impregnation fantasies, submission, slavery, oral, anal, tit-fucking, group sex, and if I missed one, I'm sure it's in there too. Now I want to see this in video.

Please continue this great story or else write another but please make us al cum!

the alliance is better and we will win the war!!!!!

... You should make sure you know what does and doesn't exist within those boundaries. Night elves cannot be paladins within the game World of Warcraft. To use the lingo...... fail... fail hard.

The anon talking about paladins is clearly a fool. It was made quite clear that the paladin in the story was a human.

to the 5/07/14 Anon. READ before you comment and call out someone else.

"Vessamoon, the Night Elf Paladin Sergeant"

Yes, right there, quoted from the article.

You have been shown to be the real fool. Now slink away, idiot.

Loving the rape of these women and their transformation into cock hungry sluts and willing breeders. More please!