All Comments on 'Original Sin Ch. 01'

Brilliant and talented writing, plot absolutly addictive

I love the story and it's very well written, but you shouldn't put their thoughts in quotes. It's confusing.

But I really can't wait to see what naughty plans Damon has for her.

3 times i read this story,i still like it a lot

OMG this is soooo good. The story line is amazing. I can't believe Cynthia could lie like this.... BITCH..

Poor poor Catherine