All Comments on 'Ostracism Pt. 04'

Enjoying this series

After much deliberation and failed attempts we finally see our heroes together and hopefully for good - the whole progress thing feels really good! The conversation between MM and Sarah was actually funny since it gave MM a lot to thing about and also showed the though process in majority of girls there. The other great thing was just how little was needed for Danny to convey his feelings and wishes to MM and even less for her to reciprocate. Now I do fear some drama will come mostly MM's way from Brandon and other guys who are already dicks to Danny but she's getting real good at excluding them from her head, just how you'll weave it remains to be seen.

5* for this one simply because there is genuine love between D & MM and they seem to realise and slowly accept it. Finally!

Rather see mark and jennifer series have some sort of resolution rather than this slog

Nice chapter with the lovers finally getting together. I'm sure it is not finished and more hills and valleys to take us through, but I am enjoying the journey.

I have enjoyed this story so far but I hope you do finish it soon. PLEASE!

It is not the end and yes, there is a (slight) plot twist.

But I can't find Ch. 5 you said it's been submitted.

Chapter 5 was submitted yesterday; it has been approved, and will be published tomorrow.

Didn't know about that procedure.