All Comments on 'Oubliette Pt. 01'

Thank you to everyone who has read and commented. The conclusion has been submitted and will hopefully appear in a few days. Hope you like it.

And Bigg_Mike did catch the typo!! :)

CHWH

Loved this first part. Got me gripped in the story right from the first paragraph, can't wait for part 2! 5 stars.

Wonderful first chapter! Each character is so well written and unique. Can't wait for your next chapter!

ARRGH!

I didn't have a chance to go online the last few days, and found this gem on page 4 of the New Submissions. Sigh.

Again, you write a wonderful tale. I begin to doubt that you could put out something not worthy of 5 stars. Look forward to seeing the conclusion up soon.

5 stars.

Wow, you've got my attention. I can't wait to see where you are taking this one. Great job.

I'm hooked! Looking forward to more! :)

I'm on board for the next part. Very curious as to what has caused Laura's situation and what she has planned for the sub (and not in the fun sense) human Ian.

Just wow!! Beautiful, intriguing and damn hot!!

I eagerly await the next chapter.

Thank you and 5 stars.

Wow! I am thoroughly hooked! Cannot wait for the second part! 5* from me!

What a wonderfully intense story! I can hardly wait for the next chapter -- thank you, colhands_warmheart, and have five stars for this beauty!

Now this has got potential. Can't wait to read more.