All Comments on 'Oubliette Pt. 02'

What a fun, sexy, little story! Loved the twists and turns, great characters, great smut, great humor. Hope to see more from you! I for one wouldn't mind seeing more of Marc and Laura in the future, but I'll be checking out anything you write. 5* from me!!!

All The Best!

T'weren't nothing (blushes).

It's easy to edit great stories. I really liked this one. I look forward for your next story.

Mike

for this story! "I love it when a plan comes together" and you did it perfectly with this story. My jaw was on the ground along with Reeds.

Excellently written, characters, plot, revenge, hot sex, the works. I too would love to see another story with Marc and Laura. I don't often request that from a writer because I figure when the story's done, it's done. But with this one, a follow up please.

5+++++ from me

@CHWH - that's one brilliant story. loved it from start to finish. Marc and Laura are going to star in my fantasies now... sheesh! i need an ice popsicle or something. BRB :D

Loved it so much. You managed so much in 2 chapters. I'm guessing that's it, although would never complain about a third! Seriously looking forward to your next story. x

I'm finally catching up on my Lit reading and was so excited to see the end of your story! I absolutely loved your characters in this story and oh, what sweet revenge. I loved how Laura played Ian. So many great plot moves to keep the readers hooked. Excellent job, lady! You too Bigg_Mike! Congrats on another great story.

~LB/Livia

ch_w, I like how you developed your storyline. The twists and turns as you slowly revealed each layer of mystery.

If the inspiration strikes you, I think this group of characters could be substantially evolved through separate storyarcs, That could overlap resulting in a much larger storyline.

Well done! Ride the wave. Keep following your muse.