by arturo
So well written and so very Hot! Loved the way you developed the story, please continue. Can't wait to see what happens next, so many, many possibilities. Hmm, Heather gets involved? The loving wife who takes it in her ass but dosen't come?
The title says it all :-)
Waiting and thanks
John
So what would Mike do if he caught his wife fucking some male exchange students? Would he be as blase about it as he is with betraying his marriage vows himself? And how will "sweet" Gabriela feel about causing the breakup of the family she so enjoyed? Think she'll ever be welcome there again? Think she'll ever let an exchange student stay with *her* family?
arrgggg spelling errors and grammar made me stop!
Terrible writing ruined what could be a fun story. Grammar, spelling, and structure are bleh. Find an editor.
As far as the person that complained about the cheating...it is fiction. Relax.