All Comments on 'Our Brazilian Exchange Student'

by arturo

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wolfarmywolfarmyabout 19 years ago
The next day, Please!

So well written and so very Hot! Loved the way you developed the story, please continue. Can't wait to see what happens next, so many, many possibilities. Hmm, Heather gets involved? The loving wife who takes it in her ass but dosen't come?

NamizujsNamizujsabout 19 years ago
Yes, please continue with the next day!

The title says it all :-)

Waiting and thanks

John

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Hell Yeah

Loved the story. Keep it coming!

Son_of_HatSon_of_Hatabout 19 years ago
WOW!

Hey, great story. I loved it! Keep it coming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Cheating Bastard

So what would Mike do if he caught his wife fucking some male exchange students? Would he be as blase about it as he is with betraying his marriage vows himself? And how will "sweet" Gabriela feel about causing the breakup of the family she so enjoyed? Think she'll ever be welcome there again? Think she'll ever let an exchange student stay with *her* family?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
spell/ grammar checks are free!

arrgggg spelling errors and grammar made me stop!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Terrible writing ruined what could be a fun story. Grammar, spelling, and structure are bleh. Find an editor.

As far as the person that complained about the cheating...it is fiction. Relax.

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