All Comments on 'Our Dance'

by Sweeter

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Damn.

Hard to pick a favorite of your writing but this is way way up there. Way up. Glad I stumbled across it. After a bit of writers block, you may have inspired me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
New one

There is a new one in erotic coupling.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Happy Day

Hope your day was a good one. What a year...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Pooped

Sometimes I get really tired of pretending I don't miss you. The more I meet new people the more I am reminded of something better I already had.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Maybe we will meet again.

I can still fall into that same fog. I can put myself back there and I brake into a great big smile. I thought this was supposed to stop happening, I thought it was supposed to fade.

I'm so glad it hasn't.

Always.

BeautifulMess0506BeautifulMess0506over 7 years ago
Me, too

I can't change our reality but I can be with you anytime in my mind. Wish I could hear your laugh, though.

Yours.

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