All Comments on 'Our Dirty Little Secret'

But it seemed ok to me. Build on it, use more dialogue, use more tease. You have the working for this to be a decent story. Allow it to build.

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I would have liked a longer story. Maybe a little more build up to each encounter, but overall it was very good.

He could be researching some porn and she could help. They would find images and videos of an older man and a younger woman. The woman would be very young and he would then be slowly sliding his finger up into her slit, splitting her labia apart, and touching her sweet soft folds, and using his middle finger, rubbing her slit and then his fingertips would trace her clit... she would be very very wet then... mmmmmm.... then he would keep clitting her until she couldn't take it anymore and want him sooooo bad for his big throbbing cock...mmmm, the fantasy... the reality.... the orgasm.... mmmmm, I want it.

This totally sucks..i cant bear it anymore..I had been reading LOUSY essays from the past 10 minutes!!!

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