All Comments on 'Our Family Calendar Ch. 01'

Obviously humour and porn don't mix. This was to be a four part story but lack of enthusiasm from my readers has led me to delete the remaining chapters. Sorry and all that.......

Really enjoyed that please resubmit the remaining chapters , I don't care about what other people say I want read the rest of your story.

I really enjoyed this and would love to know what happens next. Please reconsider as I thought that it was well written and better than some that seem to have received rave reviews

A great story with good build up. A great read, will be very interested to see the next chapter.

This has so many places it can go. I can't wait for it to continue.

Ok - you've convinced me!

Chapter 2 is with Laurel and Manu already so it should be on show in a day or two. Chapter 3 is coming along well; perhaps a week away, with the bones of Chapter 4 already put together.

Keep supporting me as you are and hopefully I'll keep writing!

New here, and this is the first story I read, wonderful start.

For each boy to stick his hard young cock up the same cunt he came out of, his own mother's warm wet ever-loving cunt. Of course it's terrific that they fuck their sisters. Their sisters' sweet slits are there to get pummeled by their brothers' big cocks, and their father's fat veiny daddy-dick as well, naturally. But there's just something about a boy unloading his balls and shooting his semen up the same wonderful hole where he was once a baby. I want to hear all about Chris and Tim becoming proud grinning young motherfuckers and their mom loving them all the more for it.

a very gifted writer. You hooked me with Bionic Cock and You've gotten nothing but better. Looking forward to more submissions from you. Please keep writing, I'll be reading. By the way, 5 stars, fave story/author and thanks for what you do.

My best, max052

That was amazing, I forced myself not to wank, but now im utterly drenched in slime.

So many lovely bits, so many possibilities.

Thanks. So far.

; D.

brilliant first chapter. looking forward to reading the rest!

After all these years - Still being read And appreciated big time! Thanks for the memories!! ...my sister and me - Too! :)