All Comments on 'Our Fire Island Group House Pt. 01'

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TigerladyandhimTigerladyandhimalmost 7 years ago

Amusing and sexy at the same time

Well done

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
literary gold. thankyou

Tell us another!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
At first hard to get into...

... but then I was into it. Great writing. Sexy, too.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
OMG you ramble

Focus!!!

You lost me several times in the first few paragraphs.

Try to stay focused or too many of us will never finish your writings.

Tail_GunnerTail_Gunneralmost 7 years ago
WOW !

The writing, my dear lady, the writing ! ... You are a cut above.

Omigod642Omigod642almost 7 years ago
More dahlin'

Love your style and observing ego.

speedboatspeedboatalmost 7 years ago
Damn!

Damn your good. Tell me more..... pleeese!

EllenMelvilleEllenMelvillealmost 7 years agoAuthor
To all you great souls who took time to comment...

Thank you!

IF you are in a hurry for more stories, or want to read my books not published here, or want to read the stories turned down by by this site and others as too naughty, you can go to Amazon and buy one of my three books for the price a decent rubber. There is also my Facebook page. Whatever you do, thanks, again, for the whispers of encouragement.

Ellen Pierce Melville (as on Amazon and Facebook)

JonGreyJonGreyalmost 6 years ago
Tantalizing

A much different tone; the teasing is highlighted exquisitely here, and I would feel bad for the men, save your role as the protagonist. Even the possibility of your exploration of Mignon adds a nice level of arousal. Thank you!

EllenMelvilleEllenMelvillealmost 6 years agoAuthor
Great comments, Jon! So perceptive and appreciative! Glad you are following me.

Check out my books on Amazon, too. Some of what I write is taboo on Literotica.

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