All Comments on 'Our First Meeting'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
wonderful romance story

Brevity is the only real flaw in this lovely romantic story, full of tender love, with engaging characters and a good plot. Were this story longer, with a more explanatory introduction and a more extensive love scene, it would be that much better.

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I enjoy writing fantasy erotic/romantic stories that make the reader feel like they are a part of the story. I write first person sometimes wanting the reader to feel the story is about them as if they are telling the story.