All Comments on 'Our First Time'

by AhuvAdonai

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Wow

Where is the second part?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Part two

Oh yes young lady, you have a great talent please write lots more stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Oh fucking hell

Part 2 please. M begging u!

Chixjinxbdsm

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
You have my attention

I'd like to hear you telling this story in Hebrew.

That would be HOT!

JesusFuckingChristJesusFuckingChristalmost 14 years ago
Amazing.... Simply Amazing

You are very very good at typing these stories. I really enjoyed this story. Please make a Chapter 2. You have no idea how much I would enjoy to read it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great

You should continue with the story it was great!

cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12over 15 years ago
well

Your first story is definitely a best effort! I do hope to see more here!

Lucky MannLucky Mannover 15 years ago
Hot First Story

Wow! Ahuva, your first story was a hot one. I anxiously look forward to the next installment. You need not worry about any language difficulties. Love and sex know no language.

If, as you said, this is based on reality, you and your boyfriend have a wonderfully tender and romantic relationship. I hope the foreplay and completion is as erotic, detailed, and exciting when he takes your cherry as it was this time.

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