All Comments on 'Our First Time'

Well done on your first - looking forward to seeing your next story

Your first story? Not evident. VERY good story. A tad short but I've read much worse. Decent development. USAF Spec Ops. Musta been a TACP or Combat Controller. Good guys. Hopefully you do another chapter? You mentioned both were married but no mention of spouses after that? No biggie

2 stars

DragonRider55 Ret USAF

Oh how amazing it is to reminisce!

Good writing, keep it up.

Is Emily going to write soon?

What is or will be her LIT site, or will she write on your site?

Emily is supposed to working on a story about our favorite encounter on a getaway trip to the beach with my boat. ;) I’m sure she’ll use her own handle but I have no idea what that will be.

Thank you for the kind words.