All Comments on 'Our First Time with Others'

I enjoyed how you made the sex sharing realistic and sensitive...most folks are somewhat ambivalent about first timing even if they think it's what they want. I also liked the snowballing which I enjoy in real life.

RyeandGingerAyle

Thank you all who liked our first story and a big thanks to those who took the time to comment. We're working on our next submission and any feed back helps.

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