by MadaamMeg
i loved it.....and you should get paid for writing something like that!!!
Omg I loved it u really should get paid for doing such a great work can't wait to check n see if u have other stories. I don't have a profile here but can find me in twitter @bbwinpr.
You have a great imagination, and I love this idea of "Our Girl", but the pace was a little rushed and your spelling/grammar/typos make it hard to read in parts.