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All Comments on 'Our Hedonistic Vacation'

by swingerjoe

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Tim413Tim413about 10 years ago
Could have been hotter, but

it was hot enough, given where the couple was in their relationship. Also one of the best written stories I have read on Lit. 5 stars!

thebuffalothebuffaloabout 10 years ago

Excellent. Very well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Good job capturing the Hedo feel.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
What a pile of garbage

To be expected from this author.

smooth87smooth87over 2 years ago

love it! sounds like a lovely couple

TwentysevenTwentysevenabout 2 years ago

I think the main point to be made here is that the story lacks any kind of dramatic tension. It is not a bad story, per se, well-written as usual, but it is just not interesting.

Carnevil9Carnevil98 months ago

I've been feeling nostalgic for good old Hedo (haven't been back there for about ten years now) and this story sure was a trip down memory lane! Nice job capturing the feel of the place. Unlike most stories on this website, this one, while perhaps not 100% true, is absolutely representative of what really goes on down there.

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Update, 4/23/19 Every once in a while, I forget why I don't write here as often anymore. Then I submit a story and remember, "Oh, yeah! That's why!" This site, and especially the Loving Wives category, used to be a great deal of fun. But then some spammer began leaving anonym...