All Comments on 'Our Last Party'

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regularguy13regularguy13over 6 years ago
thought i was reading the winner!

Loved how you started your story, calmly. Not rushing into sex.

I hated and found Joe really annoying. You must have developed that character well.

Loved the surprise with the doctor at the end. well done!

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