All Comments on 'Our Little Secret Ch. 02'

by deltablonde

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Wide open field for the story

You have set the stage with so many ways to expand the story. Please continue the good work.

TommybowlerTommybowlerabout 8 years ago
It's still fucking strange

And I still like it. Very interesting tale you are weaving here. I hope part 2 will be forthcoming

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great job

Love it. More please

darkdance69darkdance69about 8 years ago
Loved this story

Obviously he can control any woman not on the plane, and the females who were on the flight are immune

deltablondedeltablondeabout 8 years agoAuthor
From the Author: Thanks for the comments

Thanks everyone for the comments. More chapters are coming.

pois11pois11about 8 years ago
Great story, has me hooked!

It's not often that I'll read through long story chapters in one go, but this story has me absolutely hooked. Very well written. I'm off to read chapter 3!

fzoid44fzoid44about 8 years ago
Great story

I find the story, without any of the sex, to be compelling, in and of itself. Nice job!

phoenix23ninjaphoenix23ninjaabout 8 years ago
Wow

Good job, well written

This story is good, I would buy it if all were combined and published as a book

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
A fun read

Well written, different, and (I Hope) some sort of a BTB story. A solid 5 in my book.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Just in case anyone is relying on a fantasy for real world advice

It is a really bad idea to transfer fecal bacteria from anus to vagina. Don't.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I'm going to read it all

This is well done. It has a mystery, it has actual characters, it is fun, and the sex is realistic.

curveballcurveballover 1 year ago

Not a fan of rape. I quit. 0 stars if I could.

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