All Comments on 'Our Trip to Virginia Ch. 02'

From the brief note in the Index I thought your story might be worth reading.

Not So!!!

First line - "I pull my still hard cock out of your cumm filled pussy ..."!!

That idiotic word - 'you'!

It is totally ridiculous trying to make out that the Reader is/was a participant in your story.

The Reader knows that is/was not so and therefore you have immediately blown every vestige of believability.

And without believability your story is a complete waste of you time and the time of all those mugs you expected to read it.

Sorry, from a promising start (the Index) your story is not even worth one star!!

Your first 2 chapters are VERY H O T - it got me so aroused; I had to stop and take care of things !!

Please write more chapters about Vicky and Patrick; Sisters talk and this will maybe bring his wife into the action !! Thank you.

Wow!! Pros and Cons! 9 years ago. What is this. I've no reason to comment.

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