All Comments on 'Out of Bounds Ch. 01'

Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Great teaser, can't wait for this storie to continue

Well done. Give us more. Can't wait.

Looking forward to where this might lead. So far very good

Entertaining if the ages were turned around it would be, why my life turned out so well

Nicely done. Yes it needs proof reading to sort out the tiny mistakes. Those small things would give another star.

Look forward to next part.

If you need help, ask. I do write, and am willing to proof read for you.

the good things can happen.