All Comments on 'Out of Control'

I really liked this story. Please continue writing about theses two. The possibilities are endless and I want to see where she takes him. Well done!

Thanks BigMac for your feedback - much appreciated. It was the first story I've done and hope to continue about these two in the future!

i'd like to see an improvement in spelling and grammar (hate to be that girl) but when you're masturbating to a good ass story and you keep stumbling on words it can be distracting....the content was hot as hell and i love your attention to detail. Definitely keep up the good work and maybe try reading your stories out loud to yourself so you can catch any errors. Either way....I CAME!

I wouldn't mind an anonymous bareback fuck like that one

I'm only 19 but would love something like that to happen to me, what a great way to get laid

That could be me, apart from not having big tits. Similar in everyway, it's given me food for thought, I wonder if it could happen is real life