All Comments on 'Out of the Dark'

Wow. Short and bitter sweet. Thanks

Nice little story. Will there be more chapters? I look forward to reading more of this story; the accident, the rape, the baby and of course the love between these two ladies.

Sucked me right in and didn't let go. Really well written.

Brill just please make this into something more as you have left loads of avenues to write up on, many more chapters as I see it. 5 stars plus some. Iceman

but not a Rad(ical)! I've read your work on this site, I believe, ever since you started posting and never gave a score lower than a four****(that I can remember). I hope this tale has a life of its own and a continuation!!! Check your site for address.

I mean, it's not a bad little story. Kind of reminiscent of Sandy Bayer's work, both in subject and writing style. But, I found it under "lesbian sex". There wasn't any. :?

That'd should have been a longer story.