All Comments on 'Out of the Whiteness Ch. 03'

loving this story.

Great job . Will be waiting for the next chapter.

Great sex but you ended the chapter in mid-fuck! Not cool, dude.

Thanks for reading, reading, enjoying, and commenting. Your support is well appreciated.

Two women and two orgasms. It was a good place to end the chapter.

I like where you are taking this. The idea that Becky was a full time muff diver with a girlfriend and kids before her encounter with your protagonist was an interesting twist. Looking forward to more of this.

Thanks again for your comments, JM. I haven't fully developed what to do with Becky as yet. I was kind of surprised to find she was a lesbian myself. LOL. I don't know where that came from. I know we will find out before I end this series, lol.

It has sort of slid down my list of coming attractions right now but there will be more to this. Again, my thanks for your ongoing support.

is surreal. Where in the universe is such a hospital suppose to exist? When writing such a story, at least use a concept based in reality. Toss in the fact that no hospital is going "give away" the cost of providing the "VIP Floor" facilities, staff, etc and the outlandish meal service.

Dude, in the beginning there is clearly written, that this is a fantasy. So why fantasy should be based on real world?

I would have preferred that the boss was a woman. I don't like this kind of story where the women are shared with other guys. I know it is totally unfair and that in real life it is wrong but my preferred fantasy is a man with several women and no other men involved. We all have our kinks and that's mine. Involving other guys is an habitual recourse in erotica but for me is a real turn off.

The son has no socially redeeming qualities. Hopefully he has a CVA.

This is a very interesting series 4 stars

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