All Comments on 'Out Of Town'

by vivandjack

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Aurora BlackAurora Blackover 17 years ago
Your story

Has been mentioned in the New Story Reviews thread on the Lit forum (Author's Hangout).

lorencinolorencinoabout 17 years ago
To taste our mingled juices

Dominating and loving at the same time, Vivian is just overwhelmingly sexy and desirable. I loved this story and the ending is so perfect and filled with the promise of more sensual pleasure to come.

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