All Comments on 'Out-of-town Visit Ch. 02'

Nice continuation of the first story, amping up the kinkiness quite a bit. I look forward to more.

somehow you even managed to make the piss play tasteful and hot...nice job, keep writing.

I have no idea how you write a story with that level of detail without pausing every 5 minutes to pleasure yourself. I guess that explains the gap in time between the chapters. :)

You are an amazing writer. Much of the story not my usual turn ons, but still felt held in its grip even when I thought such things could not possibly. Well what do I know