All Comments on 'Outback Opportunists'

Keep going please MarcoTambo this is a hot story. Lots of things to explore with these two yet.

Very descriptive story but you missed out loosing her virginity, never known a girl that doesnt cry out in pain and also bleeds some too, other than that it was a bit believable except they live in the middle of no where, there on a cattle ranch so must see the bulls servicing the cows.

Anyway it has lots of potential

I really loved this story - it seemed so natural and believable! You do very well with dialogue as well. 'Cathie and Chris' was my favorite of your works but now I'm of two minds. Thank you so very much!

I hope she turns into a kangaroo and fucks him in the ass. Seriously, this was a fucking hot story!

Waiting for another chapter. Thanks

Good story so far but definitely needs another chapter.

you started the year with a bang...nice hot sibling romance with erotica needs a sequel

Most would call this wank material. We enjoyed your story.

My kind of incest is mom and son,but this is a close second. Thanks for the read

The Australian English really adds spice to this spicy story. Nothing else is needed. It’s tender, erotic, interesting, and well-written. Thank you for writing it.