All Comments on 'Outbreak'

I hope you did not plan on ending this story this way and planned on writing more. Now that Dr.Bowman as transformed Charles into what she has become by scratching him and breaking the skin so she could infect him. He is on his way to becoming what she is turning into. He will soon be rutting with Dr, Bowman but the part of him that was still human thought how nice it would be to breed Julie and Jennifer while he was transforming. I really hope you plan on writing more on this story as the readers need to know the outcome of the changes Dr. Bowman and Charles are going through and the fates of Julie and Jennifer, do they become wererats also? Retired Army NCO

I loved this one!

Is short thank you because 3rd time write - cellphone hungry - eat letter. Sorry. Very gooooood story. Me like. Except that whatever transpired between the first two rats, or at least what the 1st lab rat with the backpack was trying to relay to his (progesterone?) fortified female friend in hysterical heat. Was he merely trying to keep a safe wall between him and the gah-gah female, or was he developing a conscience end saw sex with her as non-con during her heat? Aaaahhhh! Have to know! Pls explain if you find some time. Shot again for story!

It's a commission so this is as much as I'm writing on this one.

Also, in regards to what the little mouse was doing at the beginning - he was simply trying to "talk" to the female and let her know he was trying to find a way out for them. A little bit of a parallel to what the main character was deal with - finding a way out of the maze.

Thanks for answer! Heaps obliged.