Outlander Ch. 10

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The Governor began to pace as he spoke. "I will start moving the Watch to the docks in plain clothes to avoid raising suspicions. If the Aramonic commander gets even a hint of your presence, they will descend on the docks like a sledgehammer, and we won't be able to hold them off long."

"We plan to set sail by midday tomorrow," Garek said.

"Good, good," the Governor's relief was obvious when he turned to look at them. "Lieutenant Lasko, return these men their weapons."

"Thank you, Governor," Garek said. "We will await your men at the docks." He motioned Jack to follow and turned for the door.

"Wait," the Governor said and strode over to Jack. "You're him? The Outlander?" He already knew, but it was as if he needed confirmation from the Outlander himself.

Jack nodded, unsure what to say. He almost flinched when the Governor suddenly dropped to a knee before him.

"Outlander," the Governor began. "I have prayed to God and Lord Aramon to send you every night since the death of my son. And now my prayers have been answered."

Tears spilled out of his eyes, but his voice didn't waver as he continued speaking. "Know this, Outlander. My sword is yours. I swear it by the blood of my fallen son. I swear it before God and Lord Aramon that when the time comes, I will follow you into hell itself. I will give you my last measure. I will have my vengeance. I will have justice." His voice had risen to a crescendo and his eyes looked to Jack for assurance.

Jack was overwhelmed by the Governor's declaration but knew he had to say something. He placed his hand on the shoulder of the man who still knelt before him and said the only thing he could to offer comfort.

"Justice will be yours," he said solemnly. Jack felt a lump form in his throat at the look of gratitude and devotion on the Governor's face. "Now, stand. We have much to do."

Garek's heart leaped at this small glimpse into the kind of leader Jack could be. A great sense of relief washed over him, and for the first time, he found himself believing that Jack truly was the Outlander of prophecy.

Jack turned to Garek just then, and the Captain felt the command in the Outlander's gaze. At that moment, he too silently pledged his fealty to the Outlander and surrendered his will to the call of destiny. For the prophecy was clear on this point: all would bow before the Outlander or be as wheat to the scythe.

Jack took his weapon when Lasko proffered it. He swung the belt around his waist and caught the opposite end with his hand. "I think it's time I knew the complete truth, Garek," he said.

"Very well, my lord," Garek said, "but can we wait until we get back to the ship? A proper explanation will take awhile."

Jack nodded as he secured the buckle of his sword belt. He set his hand on the pommel and felt the calming pulse of the leyline that seemed to live within the sword. He turned to Kairn and Grelik, who had just joined them after reclaiming their weapons. "We are headed back to the ship," he said. "Keep an eye out for snake bellies."

"Yes, Outlander," they said in unison.

No one, not even Jack, seemed to notice that he was the one giving the orders now.

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JC_The_ContinuerJC_The_Continuerover 6 years ago
The final chapter will decide

If I can continue this tale or not.

it's gonna be hard.

JC

DazbootDazbootover 8 years ago

I felt the whole ending of the chapter was rather abrupt. Jack taking control and Garek swearing fealty lacked feeling. If you're going to move them into those roles there really should've been some sort of event where Jack proves to himself and those around him that he's worthy of it. The Jack we've seen so far wouldn't have done or said those things without a proverbial kick in the ass of some sort.

sirreadsalot10sirreadsalot10over 8 years agoAuthor
research

In response to the comment about my lack of research. The bastard sword has been referred to as a long sword by some sources but also as a sword midway in length between a long sword and a short sword. This is the definition that I have chosen to use for my story purposes. While the cutlass (a short sword) is best in the confines of ship board combat, I feel the bastard sword as I define it is more versatile and better suited for the sea dogs who also provide dock security on land when the ship is in port as well as escorts for VIPs while away from the ship. Also in a world where leather armor can be strengthened by magic I don't see the purpose of those with access to such an upgrade bothering with the added weight and restriction of chain mail.

bruce22bruce22over 8 years ago
A Bewitching Tale

Look how easily Munch was disposed of. The hero still has quite a few miles to sail.

kazilla122kazilla122over 8 years ago
Ugh I'm so tired

I'm so tired of people not researching anything about weapons and armor. First why would sailors use or carry "bastard swords" which one has to assume you mean to be of the longsword variety with a tapering point and approximately four feet long. Wouldn't a cutlass or other similar sword make more sense because most fighting done on ships are done with limitations for space. Second why would the hero want a "katana" or similar sword. It is not the ultimate sword! Most historical examples are something like thirty inches of blade length with a two handed grip. Not exactly ideal for use against a longer sword. Third why is it that everyone wears leather armor, there is no historic evidence of this. What's more is that it wouldn't be the most effective armor. Leather is essentially just skin and how easy is it to cut or pierce skin. Think about what we use to protect against sharp blades today: chain mail gloves are used for protection in industries where they use knives like the meat industry and competitive lumberjacks wear chain mail socks to protect their toes. Chain mail was the most prevalent armor across the world and throughout time. Things that I like are you having more colors than dreary blacks browns and greys. However it seems that only a few people have access or can afford brighter colors. Overall I really enjoy this tale and am glad you are continuing it. Four stars!

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