All Comments on 'Outmatched Pt. 01'

by Anita_Knapp

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Congratulation

Very good writing. Please add more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Thank you!

This was amazing! You did such a great job getting us inside their heads. And FINALLY a story where the guy isn’t a whiny little bitch or insecure pervert no woman would want. Rafe’s hot, masculine, knows what he wants, and puts up a fight. Even if he lost, I’m sure he’d still be man enough to satisfy her. I loved the way you described her body betraying her, I’d have a hard time staying focused on the fight too lol.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Brilliant

Brilliant, Looking forward to the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

awesome

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I loved the story. I am gonna share this to my ex girlfriend Monika and it would remind her how I destroyed her in a wrestling match a year ago. I am going ask her rematch again.

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