All Comments on 'Outta Control Pt. 01'

YOUR NEW ON THE SCENE JUST READ YOUR OTHER STORY A COUPLE DAYS AGO. IT WAS GOOD SO I KNEW TO READ THIS STORY, EXPECTING GOOD THINGS. WELL IT STARTED OFF GOOD AND GOT BETTER. TRULY YOU COULD SE A BUILD UP TO WHERE YOU WERE GOING, WITH IS OK. BUT YOU HAD THE NERVE TO TEASE AS THOUGH THE CHEATING WAS GOING TO HAPPEN AND THE STORY WAS TAKING A DIFFERENT TURN. WELL JUST AS I HOPED THAT IS WHERE IT WOULD GO, YOU TAKE US WHERE YOU MEANT TO ALL ALONG. ONLY TO LEAVE US AT NOT ONE BUT 3 HOT PLOT TWISTS. NOW THAT IS GOOD WRITING. SO GET ON YOUR JOB AND END THE MISERY WAITING FOR THE NEXT INSTALLMENT!

Youngun' you got STYLE, and anything worth doing, is worth doing with style. Props an' preach, junior!