All Comments on 'Over the Edge'

Lovely.

Love your style of writing. Sexy and humorous. Well done.

Wonderful writing style. Very easy to read and get into.

...but I found the ending to be a bit abrupt.

Well written, exciting!

Good one -art with a capital O. Performance art comes to Lit!

That is So Hot....

Yoko Ono had the right idea!!!!

Orgasms and humor: trully an unbeatable combination. The best part of your writing is your talent for shamelessly sharing a man’s thoughts while forwarding the narrative. Such a fun read.

Oh wow, I loved this. Please add another chapter.

-Dire Wolf

A rare story that plays almost entirely in the mind. Thank you! I'd like more where that came from.

Two decades ago, I wrote two homages to Yoko's performance on my Vanna Vechian's Erotic Fiction website ('Cut piece - social interaction' and 'Cut Piece Life.' Juvenile works in comparison, but the past is the past. Anyway, I appreciate this story (and my work here as Vitavie is more mature.)

neat story, good tease! I always wondered about performance art. Enjoyed the precise description, good work, Thank you!