All Comments on 'Over the Edge'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Good

Keep it up

GamerNerdGamerNerdalmost 8 years ago
Great job.

I really enjoyed it, please make a second part.

live4thebjlive4thebjalmost 8 years ago
Reminds me when

When it was my sister and I in our parents house alone and blurted she was horny. I didn't realize till later she wanted to fuck. Oh well.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Several of my fetishes

A delightful story and I hope it escalates between the two of them (not so much the others mentioned)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
sis's titties

Please sir, I want some more!"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Excellent

It was more realistic than many of the other stories I've read about taboo sex. I absolutely adore your writing style. It gives the perfect amount of detail; not too much and not too little. Great job! You definitely should follow everyone's advice and write a sequel if you haven't already done so!

prop69prop69about 7 years ago
Big tits and he is not interested..He is a perv

Sister would love a little cuddling and sex

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
loved this

would love to hear more!

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 4 years ago
STILL NOT INCEST.!!^*!

WELL WRITTEN, READS OK. BUT IT'S NOT INCEST, OR EVEN TABOO. HE'S JUST LOOKING, AND SHE'S JUST SHOWING.

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Writer of mostly oddball comedy and ridiculous situations. I've also written other stuff that actually paid the bills.