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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Great work! You captured something that few here do...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Couldn't get past the first page.

The guy's a dolt. Really, I don't know how he wouldn't end up walking into a collapsing building because he was staring at a good looking woman.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great story....

Loved the story. What the hell is up with Michael & what is he putting in that wine?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
A nice story

A better ending would have been Kate getting pregnant

Ausking7Ausking7about 3 years ago

Please tell me there’s a part 2 from the wife’s perspective

KingCuddleKingCuddlealmost 3 years ago

Perfect whip cream and a cherry ending! :+))

You organize your unfolding story elements quite well...Looking forward to your next story!

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