All Comments on 'Overnight Bus'

You should think of continuing this. Great beginning.

proof reading might help with some of the missing words

How about a chapter 2 - the return journey - this time our heroine plays with the judge !

Its very nicely told and enjoyable, made me hard. Have a look my stories. Looking forward to your learned comments.

Take care

Madhur

Its subtle and grows on your senses....great erotic story

Too bad they didn't have more time to make use of a motel room during the dinner stopover. Also, great twist ending.

Very hot. Had me Hardin the first chapter and I came with her first climax. Many thanks .0