All Comments on 'Overpowered at the Office Ch. 04'

Douchebag needs gutting.

Loving it.

your writing is exquisite. Simon is the best male dominant character on here in a long time....very hot!

I loveyour story I hope he falls in love with her and she calls him a monster and to go to hell lol

Sandra needs to have a powerful orgasm at the hands of Simon!

Pleeeease! There is no need for him to be cruel or terrible, but perhaps Simon can bring out the passion in Sandra. Maybe if she is in her own bed and in familiar surroundings, she could relax and let go.

I would like to see them orgasm at the same time, because that would be hot.

The morning after, they could feed each other strawberries dipped in whipping cream.

Mmmm.

It's better if Sandra stops re-acting, and starts being more pro-active. By which I mean she should outwit the bugger. Hoist him with his own petard somehow. She should seriously attempt to anticipate his moves, effectively block them, and formulate a plan to have him brought to book.

What a compliment to the author that you have people on both sides with strong feelings about what should happen.... and because it's so slowly and carefully drawn out, it's impossible to know where it will go! I also like the one-page chapters.

Obviously Sandra is liking this at some level (the blow job made her wet, and in the first encounter she thought he smelled "deliciously male", lol.. plus there's the fact that she "unconsciously" left the balcony door unlocked)... I'm all for Simon getting whatever he wants, and getting away with it. That's what makes this category so fun to read!

Love it.

Excellent writing... I want you to keep going on and on and on

Thanks guys, I appreciate the positive responses and welcome constructive criticism.

I've never published anything before and I never expected such complimentary feedback, I was just bracing myself for trolls.

God damnd. I hate Simon so much. And i have the Feeling that Sandra can not escape her rape for a 2nd time. Great Story btw and 5 stars.

By this Simon psycho, but kudos on creating one hell of an evil entity. (I can't even call him a person.) I'm with the guy who wants Sandra to outwit him, but it sure doesn't seem as if that's going to happen! Good luck, Sandra, we're rooting for you.

I'd like women to know that indeed the cops would pay attention. Do tell on the bastards, and it's almost always someone you know