All Comments on 'Overpowered at the Office Ch. 05'

Definitely a good read. Hope he gets her pregnant.

Evil psycho SoB beautifully written. Shame she's wet though. Perhaps the police will believe her story when they see the wrist burns that will be there ??

when are u going to show his good side but she still has to hate him

Sandra should conceive and then give birth to a son that looks like Simon!

Prior to the birth of their son, Simon could demand to be present for each doctor's check up leading up to the birth.

Big horny predator hunk about to take his small prey completely....Love it, and the sexual tension of the buildup is so great

Hmm. I have a feeling I'll need to leave this one open-ended...so people may not be satisfied but at least not completely disappointed. Also considering continuing quite a way and introducing a new villain, though I'm sure this would annoy some.

....with little Simons running around everywhere, pissed-off but powerless boyfriends, etc., etc.

I like the idea of leaving this open ended as it just adds to the tension, the reader left hanging and filling in details in the imagination

At least leave it until after they do the deed. I'm not clamoring for pregnancy like the others are but I reckon this story needs a proper conclusion in whether or not Sandra ends up enjoying his advances. Getting wet doesn't really count as a clear indicator; not when she's protesting against it vehemently mentally.

Ending it here would be frankly quite disappointing after you've dragged it out for so long. If do intend to do so, you could've done this in one shot rather than spreading it across multiple chapters.

Also, that last line seems more like it's hinting at a continuation rather than an open ending.

I couldn't write such a slow-moving story without pending action :) I wasn't clear before, my point about the ending wasnt referring to this particular chapter.

Will only work if you are going to do another series with the pair. For example Security Binds Her went onto Striking a Balance. Ending the story without a conclusion would otherwise be a cop out. Write it as you want, not to please you readers.

Ps...a steak knife through his balls would be original :-))

This is the first time i am commenting...only for this story. Please post rest of the story

.... but "steak knife thru the balls"? Whoa dude, that's sick. calm down man it's just a story.

She should get some brains from some place and start using 'em. She's such an infuriatingly stupid little cow, and so behind the fucking eight ball...that I want to slap her sideways myself.

she should feign interest and get clingy and talk about marriage and kids. Once he no longer sees her as an unwilling conquest he'll lose interest rapidly. Problem solved

Brimming with sexual tension

or your writing is that good or it is just rape, and that is hurting my feelings