All Comments on 'Overtime at the Office'

Great story! Good job as a first submission. Looking for a sequel.

What happens when they Netflix and chill?

a decent tale. a few miscues telling itas you do...subject/verb..."he ran his hands through her hair" not, "he runs his hands...".

That survivable.

Delicious tale!

Thank you for the feedback. I will work on the next chaper.

I appreciate the feedback concerning noun/verb agreement. I admit I need work on that. I hated English class and now im paying for it.

are they co-workers?

friends?

good friends?

friends with benefits?

or . . ?

I MRS KUNDAN G PARAKH IS WORKING IN CORPORATE OFFICE MY BOSS ALWAYES TGIVE ME WORKE BEFORE I WANT TO LEAVE OFFICE SO IHAVE TO STAYED AT OFFICE LATE NIGHT AND BOSS ALWASE MAKE ME LEFT HOME BY HIS BIG LUXRIOUS CAR SITTING ON HIS LAP HE FUCK ME AT OFFICE AND NOW I AND MY BOSSALWAYES LEFT LATE NIGHT NIGHT PLEASE CARREY ON YOUR STORIES AND MAKE ME HORNY.

THANKS

sanjay2008_99@rediffmail.com

Can co-workers - or simply neighbors - stay as FWB where this couple is now?

Can they see others and come back together, REALLY? And can they remain professionals at work without other employees adding 2 + 2 based on what was overheard or seen?

BUT the strongest marriages I've seen were begun with the couple at least working in the same organization, if not in the same office or on the same floor. Check the stats.