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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
So.. What's Her Name?

Umm..Did you know that the female character in your story changes from Patti to Katie.. Wtf?

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
good job

Yeah. Patti to Katie? But your story's wet and hot. Loved it.

SecretGarden89SecretGarden89over 8 years ago
Proof read.

Your female characters name changes half way through the story. Just make sure you proof read before you post.

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