All Comments on 'Overworked and Worked Over'

by DinaDevereux

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
what a dirty white slut

White cunts sure know how to ride a big black dick

kathy2b46kathy2b46over 12 years ago
nice

good story , very believable and true sounding, any white girl would squirt on his cock yumme, hope we can read some more

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Part 2? Cuz this shit was hot.

I would LOVE to see another chapter of this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
MOOOOORRRE!!!

Please continue this story until it gets boring. Right now it isn't and I have to find out how this plays out. There has to be more! It sounds like a good start of a long adventurous thing. NICE!

DinaDevereuxDinaDevereuxover 12 years agoAuthor
working on chapter 2 now

thanks for your comments! i'm hoping to have chapter 2 on here this week!

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxover 12 years ago
*wipes sweat off my body

still sweating...too hot....going to take a really cold shower

DarkTemptation434DarkTemptation434over 12 years ago
Excellent

Excellent story I cannot wait for more chapters. Keep it coming.

BlackRexxxBlackRexxxover 12 years ago
DARK KNIGHT'S

THAT WAS HOT. MORE STORIES OF BROTHUA'S SAVING DAY IN MORE THAN ONE WAY. MORE PAGE'S AND CHAPTERS. YOU GOT A HIT ON YOUR HANDS HERE.

Lynn_MXXLynn_MXXover 11 years ago
Loved it!

Very good. Keep on writing, especially stories of this genre (BM_WW, risk of pregnancy)

cockcriticcockcriticalmost 7 years ago

Enjoyed this tale I don't think I could have last as long as Malcolm to give the young lady what she needed, I would have done better than her ex boyfriend and have been more caring for her with her job. Malcolm certainly "worked her over well".

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