by FantasizeAndRealize
Thanks for all of the constructive comments that people gave me throughout this story. I have taken them into consideration. I had a lot of fun writing this story.
I feel lucky to be able to give back to Literotica, a site that has given me so much pleasure for many years now!
I read these stories all the time and this was a great story. I am so glad that you put
the right touches of funny, sadness and etc., to make this a great story. Keep them coming.
First off, I love this series. It's hot and dirty fantasy, and I've come back to it several times. But now, I just noticed something. In basically every 'non-con' type story, there are trolls commenting things like "Then he said "no, I'm not dealing with your shit," and he lived happily ever after when she went to jail for whatever." You'd think that those trolls would be leaving reviews here about how fantastic the ending was, but I guess they're only able to complain...
one minor comment: is he going to have his vasectomy reversed after he gets married? lol. GREAT story arc!
A fantastic ending to the series, all well written and interesting. A good grasp of your characters, great details
It's rare such a whirlwind tale gets such a reasonable and thought out ending. Based on what I've read by the Author about himself, perhaps real life plays a big part as well.