All Comments on 'Oyster Creek Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
enjoying this series

Been anticipating each new chapter..intelligent and sexy;

BUT PLEASE...

smirk - definition of smirk by the Free Online Dictionary, Thesaurus ...

www.thefreedictionary.com/smirksmirk (smûrk). intr.v. smirked, smirk·ing, smirks. To smile in an affected, often offensively self-satisfied manner. n. An affected, often offensively self-satisfied smile. ...

Soebek110Soebek110over 12 years agoAuthor

Anon, you've not left an email address so I can't contact you directly, which means I'll have to comment on my own story (sad as that is).

What I want to say is - thank you for pointing that out. It's little things like that which improve my writing as a whole. I've looked into what you said and it turns out you are right, so I'm going to have to go through my back catalogue and replace all instances of the word "smirk". A long task, but better than leaving a word in there I now know is innappropriate!

So thank you!

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