All Comments on 'Chronicles of a Changed Man 01'

Well, well,well.

It's a budding literary genius your'e aiming for is it!!

really, really good stuff Mick x x

(Couldn't wait till tonight LOL)

The start wasn't 'boring' at all as you said to me in the last e mail, you rascal.

..It was very informative and a well paced intro, in my humble opinion. It then built up to quite a rapid pace and yep the 'language of love' started flowing LOL

I certainly recognise the arse man! and look forward to hearing his further dissent into wickedness x x x

Tina sounds a right goer!!

Phew !!!! Now I must put my knicks back on and get the tea on the go!!!

to your first story posted in Literotica; "Paddy's awkening continues soon !"

Make that very soon.

You are off to a 5 star start.

No doubt, your man Paddy is a lucky lad, indeed. Keep him coming.

Bloody Hell that was good.

Thanks fellow Literoticans for your very kind comments. I was seriously concerned that it was a bit long and slow to get of the ground. Glad you stuck with it and... hey... it gets a lot naughtier..... he's a bowld fella.... waiting to be let loose....

May the road rise up to meet yis all....

Congratulations on a finely crafted story. I hope all these positive comments will encourage you to keep posting here at Lit.

It's got everything - humour, compassion, steaming hot sex and it's written with an effortless style and unhurried pace.Very readable and engaging, a fantastic first posting. Keep up the great work. x

Good write up!

Hats off to you. I liked the meter of the story. I really enjoyed your word choice to tell the story. At points the story had prose like quality's. It flowed easily, never bogging down. Your first story, Bravo!

hi Wobie

A very good story. Thank you.

I just celebreated my 70th. Not easy to get good sex at this age. but when I do, I fuck better and than I did 30 years ago. And lasting a few hours longer than I did when I was 20.

That was one of the nicest stories I have read on Literotica. It was so exciting without being crude. I am sure that many women have those sort of fantasies with an old man. Well worth 5 out of 5 votes.

Mary

Particularly enjoyed the moment when Tina admitted her desire for you and that it was never about the money. Very hot!

A woman with a full thick bush with a high pubic mound, sounds like my wife. So hot!